Wednesday 9:06
See this for background: Experiment
Dear TF,
I am writing to let you know that I will be in London for all or part of Aug. *-* and *-*. [Mostly for a family vacation, but I am on the verge of accepting an offer of a post doc at------- College, so I expect I'll find the city interesting in a whole new way.] I would be curious to see you again, but would entirely understand if you'd rather not.
I hope this note finds you well,
A
Not sure whether to include the stuff in square brackets...
or the whole damn thing. Any comments?
Dear TF,
I am writing to let you know that I will be in London for all or part of Aug. *-* and *-*. [Mostly for a family vacation, but I am on the verge of accepting an offer of a post doc at------- College, so I expect I'll find the city interesting in a whole new way.] I would be curious to see you again, but would entirely understand if you'd rather not.
I hope this note finds you well,
A
Not sure whether to include the stuff in square brackets...
or the whole damn thing. Any comments?
posted by Abby at 12:16 PM
2 Comments:
You went with casual and straightforward. Good choice. Seems like a letter that does what you need - tells him you'll be local and still think of him. Go with it.
I think it sounds good - friendly but not gushy or intimidating.
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